Separated Shadow
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Elmar and Ramel
are identical twins. Although they look the same, their personalities are in
contrast. Elmar, who's the oldest, is naughty and jolly while Ramel, the
youngest, is serious and obedient. They do things together and wear the same
outfit each day. Both enjoy the company of each other without the interference
of other people. There comes a time that both of them have to grow up and learn
something. To avoid confusions, their parents sent them in two different
schools. Elmar goes to West High Elementary School while Ramel went to East
High Elementary School. In new surroundings, the twins formed their own circle
of friends. They learned to socialize with other people. Sometimes because of
Elmar's naughtiness, they exchange places. Elmar will go to Ramel School and
vice versa.
One day on his way home, Elmar fought with his classmate. The fight
turned from words to fist. Luckily, Elmar is a fighter. He beat his opponent
and went home happily, excited to tell Ramel about it. Later did he know that
the guy he beat is the younger brother of a fierce gangster. On the next day,
Ramel's class was shortened so while preparing to leave the school, he called
her brother on the phone but no one answered. "Maybe he's busy", he
thought and walked home alone. As he was about to round the corner to their
house, a group of guys were following him. Scared, he called his brother again
and again, but his phone was off. He was running, when he realized that there
were three guys in front of him. One was tall and scary looking. The other one
was short and grumpy. Behind them was a boy who was the same age as him and
full of wound in the face. The boy pointed Ramel and said to his companions
that he's the one who beat him. Ramel didn't understand what they were talking
about. He did not remember beating someone. Then he realized Elmar beat a boy
just the other day. He thought maybe this was the boy Elmar beat last night and
now seeking for revenge. He observed that the boy's companions were carrying a
baseball bat and a knife. They were advancing to him quickly. The guys that
were following him a while ago were now encircling him. A nasty smile played on
their lips. He firmly holds his the phone on his left hand and tried calling
his brother. Again, no one answered. A hard thing slammed the back of Ramel
that made him dizzy. Strong punches on his stomach followed. Blood was now
pouring out of his mouth and nose. Then he felt a sharp thing slowly piercing
his body. He cried and shouted in pain but knew no one will hear him. He's
surrounding was now in blur. He could faintly see the retreating figures of the
people around him. He felt very tired and sleepy. The last thing he could see
before engulfing into eternal sleep was the smiling face of his brother.
Meanwhile, Elmar, who joined his friends to gallivant, just remembered to call
his brother. He realized that his phone was off and when he turned it on there
were 30 missed calls from Ramel. He went home quickly, worried about what had
happen to Ramel. When he arrived, a lot of cars were parked near their house
and teary-eyed people come and go in their house. He ran inside confused and
worried. There, lying inside a coffin was his brother. Tears were now flowing
down his face. His mother went up to him and embraced him. He asked how did this
happen and his mother told her the story. He cried and cried blaming himself
about the death of his brother. He went to the coffin to see the face of his
brother. More tears flowed from his seeing not an accusing face but smiling
face of his brother. The only word he can utter at that moment was I'm
sorry....

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